V Part five : The big party
Adair used flying magic. In a few hours he returned to the Elf World. The Elf king, Ray, was happy to see Adair because he had killed Elma.
Then Roy gave him a present. He said that it was special,”If you open it,you’ll be back home.” Adair took the present, then he went back home.
Immediately, Adair got uo, then he wanted to know is he had really went to the Elf World or not.
Then, he saw his bed had a presint on it , so he knew it was all true. He remembered that the Elf king had given him a speacil present.
He opend the present. Suddenly his old door changed into a magic door, so he thought the Elf World needed help again. That night,he dreamed of the Elf King. He told him that the fight hadn’t finished because Elmd’s daughter was a live. “I don’t need your help because her daughter is still young.” Adair thought Elma’s daughter wiould lose eventually because villains always olse. And he thought that if everyboy always acted in the right way, the would be a better place.
Tuesday 29 May 2007
The Magic Door
IV Part four: The final fight
Elma sid “Let’s start the fight but you can reconise that you will lose!”
“That’s impossible, you will lose because nobody is left to helps you!”
Then Adair and Elma started to fight.
Elma used fire that evuptrf fram the ground, There was a lot of fire all around.she used water magic and wind magic,then water again, to attcak Adair. Adair used ice magic, and the sky started to hail, but Elam didn’t get hurt because of the fire magic, which melted the hail.
Elma thought Adair couldn’t win because she just had Elma. He had a heart so Adair realized, he may be defeated.
Then Adair thought about what Baron had taught him. He had said light magic could only be used one time, but if you hit a ghost, that ghost will have a heart again.
Adair used the light magic and all the Ghost castle was broken. Elma also died but Adair used flying magic so he didn’t died.
Elma was dead but Adair hadn’t seem her daughter.
Elma sid “Let’s start the fight but you can reconise that you will lose!”
“That’s impossible, you will lose because nobody is left to helps you!”
Then Adair and Elma started to fight.
Elma used fire that evuptrf fram the ground, There was a lot of fire all around.she used water magic and wind magic,then water again, to attcak Adair. Adair used ice magic, and the sky started to hail, but Elam didn’t get hurt because of the fire magic, which melted the hail.
Elma thought Adair couldn’t win because she just had Elma. He had a heart so Adair realized, he may be defeated.
Then Adair thought about what Baron had taught him. He had said light magic could only be used one time, but if you hit a ghost, that ghost will have a heart again.
Adair used the light magic and all the Ghost castle was broken. Elma also died but Adair used flying magic so he didn’t died.
Elma was dead but Adair hadn’t seem her daughter.
The Magic Door
Part three:On the Way to the Ghost Castle
Adair went to the Ghost World,and he sawAbner.Both sides started to fight.Abner could used all the Ghost magic so he drove Adair back.Adair got lost.Then,Abner said he would personally fight Adair.Abner disappeared.Adair sontinued walking to the Ghost castle,then,he saw many ghosts but he easily defeated them.
In a few hours,Adair saw Abner again and both sides started fighting.If one side won,they would gain control of the castle.
During the fight,both side were fighting with stregth,and noone appeared to be winning.then Adair left the battle and kept walking.Adair thought Ghost castle was near because he saw shadaw and he thought Elma and Abner were in it.
In the Ghost castle Elma was hitting Abner because Abner hadn’t killed all the elves,Elma said that he couldn’t kill the elves,he couldn’t be her general.
Adair and his elves walked into the Ghost castle and found Abner waiting for them.Abner said he had been waiting for a long time.He wanted fighted to the finish.
They started fighting.Adair used ice magic but Abner also used that magic,Adair used many kinds of magic,but Abner also knew them so both sides couldn’t win.Adair used a speaci fire magic that looked like ice magic,and Abner fell in to his trap.Then fire surromded Abner and he died.
When Abner died,Adair was so happy but he still needed to defeat Elma because if he didn’t stop her,she wiould find new general and start the advance again.
When Adair had killed Abner, him and hissolders started to enter the Ghost castle bat the Ghost castle was up very high in the moun tains, Adair and the elves walker up the stairs but every floor had many traps by the time they had reached half way, many elves had died.
Soon Adair was all a long, all the elves had died, Adair thought this was the finally the place to fkght, Adair saw Elma and they started to fight.
Adair went to the Ghost World,and he sawAbner.Both sides started to fight.Abner could used all the Ghost magic so he drove Adair back.Adair got lost.Then,Abner said he would personally fight Adair.Abner disappeared.Adair sontinued walking to the Ghost castle,then,he saw many ghosts but he easily defeated them.
In a few hours,Adair saw Abner again and both sides started fighting.If one side won,they would gain control of the castle.
During the fight,both side were fighting with stregth,and noone appeared to be winning.then Adair left the battle and kept walking.Adair thought Ghost castle was near because he saw shadaw and he thought Elma and Abner were in it.
In the Ghost castle Elma was hitting Abner because Abner hadn’t killed all the elves,Elma said that he couldn’t kill the elves,he couldn’t be her general.
Adair and his elves walked into the Ghost castle and found Abner waiting for them.Abner said he had been waiting for a long time.He wanted fighted to the finish.
They started fighting.Adair used ice magic but Abner also used that magic,Adair used many kinds of magic,but Abner also knew them so both sides couldn’t win.Adair used a speaci fire magic that looked like ice magic,and Abner fell in to his trap.Then fire surromded Abner and he died.
When Abner died,Adair was so happy but he still needed to defeat Elma because if he didn’t stop her,she wiould find new general and start the advance again.
When Adair had killed Abner, him and hissolders started to enter the Ghost castle bat the Ghost castle was up very high in the moun tains, Adair and the elves walker up the stairs but every floor had many traps by the time they had reached half way, many elves had died.
Soon Adair was all a long, all the elves had died, Adair thought this was the finally the place to fkght, Adair saw Elma and they started to fight.
Saturday 26 May 2007
The Magic Door
II Part Two:The Pratise of Magic
In the Elf Castle,Adair started to pratise magic.One day,Baron said he needed to study light magic.He told Adair that the light magic,could only be used one time,but that it could give ghosts a big heart.then,they would feel the way people do.
In a few days,Adair could used the light magic,so Baron gave him a test.If he got a perfect score on that test,Baron would give him a speacil present.In the test,Adair used magic well so he got a perfect.The next day,Baron gave him a present.It looked long and thin,Adair opened the present.It was a long stick.Baron taught Adair how to used it.
In the few days,Adair could use the magic stick well,so he could go to the Ghost World to fight Elma and Abner.He told Roy he wanted to start fighting in the Ghost World,and Roy agreed.So Adair walked to the Ghost World.
In the Ghost castle,Elma was hitting Abner everyday.One day,Elma told Abner that he needed to take a hard test,becausehe was always so stupid.If he did well,he could got a magic ball.Then Abner took the hard test.In the test,Abner needed to fight with Elma’s ghosts,and the ghost could use all the Ghost Magic,so Abner had a difficult to winning.But those ghosts saw Abner was so stupid so they didn’t attack enugh,and in the end Abner won.
Elma gave Abner a high score.Then Abner got the magic ball.Elma taught him how to use that ball and said that the ball would help Abner to use all the Ghost Magic and it would also make his magic much stronger.
In a few wekks,Abner could use more magic and do it more easily so Elma thought it was time to take control of the Elf World.She told Abner that he needed to start their advance into the Elf World.Abner advance to the other world.
In the Elf Castle,Adair started to pratise magic.One day,Baron said he needed to study light magic.He told Adair that the light magic,could only be used one time,but that it could give ghosts a big heart.then,they would feel the way people do.
In a few days,Adair could used the light magic,so Baron gave him a test.If he got a perfect score on that test,Baron would give him a speacil present.In the test,Adair used magic well so he got a perfect.The next day,Baron gave him a present.It looked long and thin,Adair opened the present.It was a long stick.Baron taught Adair how to used it.
In the few days,Adair could use the magic stick well,so he could go to the Ghost World to fight Elma and Abner.He told Roy he wanted to start fighting in the Ghost World,and Roy agreed.So Adair walked to the Ghost World.
In the Ghost castle,Elma was hitting Abner everyday.One day,Elma told Abner that he needed to take a hard test,becausehe was always so stupid.If he did well,he could got a magic ball.Then Abner took the hard test.In the test,Abner needed to fight with Elma’s ghosts,and the ghost could use all the Ghost Magic,so Abner had a difficult to winning.But those ghosts saw Abner was so stupid so they didn’t attack enugh,and in the end Abner won.
Elma gave Abner a high score.Then Abner got the magic ball.Elma taught him how to use that ball and said that the ball would help Abner to use all the Ghost Magic and it would also make his magic much stronger.
In a few wekks,Abner could use more magic and do it more easily so Elma thought it was time to take control of the Elf World.She told Abner that he needed to start their advance into the Elf World.Abner advance to the other world.
Tuesday 15 May 2007
The Magic Door
Once,long ago,a man named Adair.He wasa monkey person,he always jump around.if he didn’t’ jump,he would get sick.He had a magic door but he didn’t know it.He lived in an old house and there wasn’t many people around,so he didn’t have any friends.One day,he heard a strange sound,it was coming from an oid door.Adair got up and opened the door.Suddenly,Adair disappeared.The next thing he was in a strange world.there weren’t any roads and the houses very tall.Adair saw a man.He was named Baron.He was tall and thin,and he looked like a funny man. Adair asked him. Where is this place? This is the Elf World, and are you Adair? asked Baron” Yes I am.”agreed Adair”we’ve expecting you.The Elf King wants to see you.”said Baron “You should come to the castle with me.”
Baron took Adair to the castle, And Adair saw the Elf King, He was named Roy He has fat and had small eyes,nose,ears,mouth and he didn’t have any hair.The Elf King Roy said “You have got a magic door,is because the magic door though you can helps me to killed the ghost .Another world called the Ghost world wants to conquer our world, so we need stop them,I will have Baron teaches you magic.It will help you to aid us against the Ghost world.”
In the Ghost castle,there was a Ghost Empress.Her mother had died,so she Elma,had become the empress,but she also wanted to control both worlds.The empress Elma doesn’t have a body so if you use your hand to hit her,she didn’t feel it.And she is angry a lot and if she is angry,she always kills elve.Elma was thinking “I need someone to help me conquer the Elf World.I need to find a soldrer.”then Elma used a magic ball to helps her find a soldrer.The magic ball found a ghost. His name was Abner.He didn’t have a body,like Elma,so sometimes people couldn’t see him.Abner could use magic to fight there elve but he was a fool so he usually lost.When Abner went to the Ghost castle,she made him general of the Ghost World.This two ghost started auar,but Abner always failed so Elma started hitting him all the time,soAbner always feels sad.After two weeks,the both side were starting pratise magic.If one side had more magic,they could delete the other.
Baron took Adair to the castle, And Adair saw the Elf King, He was named Roy He has fat and had small eyes,nose,ears,mouth and he didn’t have any hair.The Elf King Roy said “You have got a magic door,is because the magic door though you can helps me to killed the ghost .Another world called the Ghost world wants to conquer our world, so we need stop them,I will have Baron teaches you magic.It will help you to aid us against the Ghost world.”
In the Ghost castle,there was a Ghost Empress.Her mother had died,so she Elma,had become the empress,but she also wanted to control both worlds.The empress Elma doesn’t have a body so if you use your hand to hit her,she didn’t feel it.And she is angry a lot and if she is angry,she always kills elve.Elma was thinking “I need someone to help me conquer the Elf World.I need to find a soldrer.”then Elma used a magic ball to helps her find a soldrer.The magic ball found a ghost. His name was Abner.He didn’t have a body,like Elma,so sometimes people couldn’t see him.Abner could use magic to fight there elve but he was a fool so he usually lost.When Abner went to the Ghost castle,she made him general of the Ghost World.This two ghost started auar,but Abner always failed so Elma started hitting him all the time,soAbner always feels sad.After two weeks,the both side were starting pratise magic.If one side had more magic,they could delete the other.
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